getting rusty - tempered for profection
Published Wednesday, January 25, 2006 by landmine landmine | E-mail this post
the tinman sent his resume to the local chop shoppe
only to come home with another hole for a heart
he spewed oil by the gallons till he finally dropped
when a drifter came a long and put him in a shopping cart
he sold his shiny armor to the refinery
just enough scrap metal for about seven fifty
now strolling the rusting streets of this twisted city
half holding his bottle now half empty.
Oh so good, love the ending; your writing really paints a picture.