pickaxe
Published Monday, January 02, 2006 by landmine landmine | E-mail this post
(this works well too a low hum)
low and low, ive been diggin for the reason we hunt coal
gold on gold, weve been rushin for the season to shine so...so
b-b-b-but
im just not too proud of
the roots ive been hackin up
along with whats left of my lungs
sew me shut, im flushed and closing shop
oh the shame, i just want the feeling to haunt me
so grave
Hmm, I wonder if this will work this time. Last time I attempted to comment I marveled at the ingenuity of your writings, I will do this now, although, nothing ever comes out as good as the first time. The things you write never cease to amaze me, you truly have a talent with words; a talent which is shown well through everything you write, this especially. I'd pull out the one line I like best from "pickaxe" but then I feel obligated to put in the next, because theyre all, simply, awesome, as is almost everything else here.
This better post or I give up.